The writing turned out to be just too light, so I went over it again. Having two layers gives it a kind of ephemeral quality that works very nicely. I did have a bit of a typo, though, on the last word, and even though I've scraped and erased most of it, you can still kind of tell (the problem with doing an all-white book!), so I'm going to do a few more layers of text to blend it in, which should also heighten the feeling as well. I think I may do that before I finish off the cut-outs I've started there on the side.